25 responses to “Sea-dirge

  1. Three heavy duty couplets, brother. I see you in a beach chair wearing sunglasses for the glare off the grey water, staring at the horizonless seascape, where the line, the earth’s edge, is hidden in the dun day.

  2. This is absolutely exquisite, Bjorn! 💝 I particularly love; “a piercing pewtered prayer for the brightness of my storm.” Inspired~

  3. I’m looking forward to getting started on Kerry’s word list. I love your sea dirge, particularly the sullen sea and the pewtered prayer.

  4. kaykuala

    A surface stretched horizonless
    from water-salt to the somber sky,

    The situation seemed hopeless with the increasing number of deaths
    registered around the world


  5. This is a beautifully atmospheric poem, Bjorn. What a great introduction to my April word-a-day list! Thank you.

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