Honey, spoil me rotten
with your kisses
soft as cotton.
be my missus, honey.
Let’s be wedded
when it’s sunny.
We’ll stay bedded
if it’s raining,
with the daylight, waning,
it’s not my plotting
and spoil you rotten.
Today it’s Quadrille at dVerse. Lillian hosts and the word is spoil… you know it now the poem should be exactly 44 words including the word of the day.
November 19, 2018
A sheer delight!
Made me grin from ear to ear! I have the idea that you do indeed spoil your missus rotten 🙂
A good idea! I should have done that today while fighting the tail end of the flu.
Another romantic aspect of your poetics. You had fun with this one, and left me smiling.
A little bit jazzy. Lovely.
This is so romantic Bjorn, and reminds me of Abba’z song- Honey,Honey.
What fun. I love that you spoil each other when it is raining and you kissing. This made me smile hugely.
There’s such a lovely playfulness to this. Exactly what all good relationships need.
What a sweet talker….er, writer.
Wonderfully sensual write, Bjorn! ❤
kissing and spoiling rotten works for me 🙂 sweet ditty
This is really good, Bjorn. “Kisses soft as cotton…” Brilliant!
Perfect image to match you poem – I come away feeling both disoriented and charmed – nice!
Too well written, Björn! Made me smile as I read it. Wished I’d written it!
Nice sound: “spoil me rotten…soft as cotton”
Nice! Great plan.
Oh I love the feeling of this ….. sexy and sweet 🙂
Ah, the rain makes us promise things and kisses surely spoil! A comfortable, sweet poem!
This just made me smile. Spoiled rotten indeed.
I like reading this as if you’re talking to literal honey. 🙂
Sweet, yummy soft- an new twist on onomatopoeia – like one long mmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhh
oooooh. sensual and playful!
Bring on the rain 🌧
to be spoiled and to spoil rotten on a rainy day is pure bliss -love your repetition of the emotion
I think this is a very romantic proposal to one lucky girl!
Have a blessed day.