My dreamer-ghost,
breeze shimmer-grin
melt clouds, un-scar
be whisper-rose and green
be sound of leaves at dawn
spill echoes, flicker,
drizzle storm
journey,
cue my breath
balloon the spring
be spark and lull
twist open fear
let’s bubble-dance
pepper giggle-curls
be shadow-still
be you.
The lake fairy by Kimon Loghi
A second Quadrille with all the words we have used so far… hmm not really easy now.
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August 14. 2017
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Sucker for the romance of your words
You amaze me…all of you who take on this challenge. Nicely done using the imperative voice.
Brilliant! :o)
Beautiful weaving ~ Specially like: spill echoes, flicker,
drizzle storm
“drizzle storm” is my favorite. I love that two of your extra words are “be,” and the beauty that repetition brings.
Looks like you got them all in there, and they make sense. That’s pretty good!
Not easy, but lots of fun!
Wow, that is impressive!
Thank you for this drift for the imagination
ooooooh. this is enchanting. it flowed so well.
Brilliant!
I have enjoyed this poem many times. “Un-scar” is such an effective verb. I think we should do that — whatever it takes to make fresh, unharmed skin.
These are so beautiful:
“be whisper-rose”
“drizzle storm
journey” (love that band)
Probably my favorites:
“cue my breath”
“twist open fear”
So cute:
“let’s bubble-dance
pepper giggle-curls”
This is all I needed to hear:
“be you”
Obviously I’m really into this poem. 😛
Not easy at all with all the words but this is really good. “Cue my breath” has to be my favorite.
All the words indeed! Brilliant!
ooooh…well played Sir…it is getting tricky now for sure.
Impressive! You have returned with a “bang” of brilliance.
Some dazzling word-smithing in this. ‘balloon the spring’ ~ sigh ~ and Wowsers!!!
And what a delightful poem they make!