Come break this night

Open shadows, breeze me dawn.
Rose me clouds and spill the spark
to shimmer leaves, a twist of green.
With whispered dance, come lull with grins,
to bubble-melt and skip-jump toe-curled
cues to journey, mend my scars,
Come break this night with lights unjarred.

© Björn Rudberg

© Björn Rudberg

Added a second Quadrille, using all the words we have had up till now (25 given words out of 44). Join me at dVerse to bring me dawn.

January 30, 2017

27 responses to “Come break this night

  1. “Open shadows, breeze me dawn.
    Rose me clouds and spill the spark”

    oh, how I luv your invitation, I am definitely a dawn person

    much love…

  2. Reading this aloud, it is so good in the mouth! Wonderful, Bjorn. I sometimes think that a poem in the mouth trumps a poem on the page. And this did. A lovely rhythm to it.

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