Breeze becomes you

Breeze becomes you
as my cue to breathe:
to melt;

it opens shadows
lulls and spills me
rose-clouds;
it shimmers green;
it grins and sparks.

… and like words
we dance with leaves;
we twist and bubble-skip
on this enchanted journey
of a song unjarred.

Peasant couple dancing by Albrecht Dürer

Peasant couple dancing by Albrecht Dürer

A second offering, where I have used all the words of Quadrille at dVerse.

November 21, 2016

23 responses to “Breeze becomes you

  1. … and like words
    we dance with leaves;
    we twist and bubble-skip
    on this enchanted journey
    of a song unjarred………………..simply loved it!

  2. Again – an incredible title – I’d be interested in knowing if you start from a title or vice versa. I always title after I’ve finished a piece, but I’m beginning to wonder if I should mix my approach up a bit.

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