The first in first perspective

When I see eyes of children
starving, bellies swollen.
I wonder if my problem
lies in first of first perspective.

The I in I, the eye for eye
and maybe first should be
a second, even third and move
what’s third to first perspective.


A second offering writing for Victoria’s prompt at dVerse writing in the first perspective.

February 25, 2016

15 responses to “The first in first perspective

  1. as they say here, first world problems… there are just so many humans now – and each of us puts ourselves first… ~

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