11 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – First Dream (Hatsuyume)”

1. Access barred but opens the mind – very intriging

2. Nothing an imagination can’t push past.
   Very nice….

3. great surprise in that last line
   yes – keep pushing

   cheers!
   JzB

4. Maybe it’s not that access is barred but that it’s the key that needs finding. 🙂

5. In next dream you will open it 🙂

6. You stopped me cold with that last line. Stunning!

   Holiday Dreaming

7. some dreams are cut short… but we can still dream

8. “access barred” – it’s right up there with the dream about being chased, I think. Many people would relate to his piece – one of life’s truisms captured in a haiku.

9. an interesting dream … something to overcome to be able to go into that field of silver … a great haiku btw … really beautifully done!

10. Nicely done! You often capture momentous events in life with your haiku.

11. Imagination …it speaks our hearts…. wonderful haiku… 🙂

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