11 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – First Dream (Hatsuyume)

  1. “access barred” – it’s right up there with the dream about being chased, I think. Many people would relate to his piece – one of life’s truisms captured in a haiku.

  2. an interesting dream … something to overcome to be able to go into that field of silver … a great haiku btw … really beautifully done!

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