the silver road –
shining in my first dream
access barred
Linked to Carpe Diem
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January 29, 2015
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Access barred but opens the mind – very intriging
Nothing an imagination can’t push past.
Very nice….
great surprise in that last line
yes – keep pushing
cheers!
JzB
Maybe it’s not that access is barred but that it’s the key that needs finding. 🙂
In next dream you will open it 🙂
You stopped me cold with that last line. Stunning!
Holiday Dreaming
some dreams are cut short… but we can still dream
“access barred” – it’s right up there with the dream about being chased, I think. Many people would relate to his piece – one of life’s truisms captured in a haiku.
an interesting dream … something to overcome to be able to go into that field of silver … a great haiku btw … really beautifully done!
Nicely done! You often capture momentous events in life with your haiku.
Imagination …it speaks our hearts…. wonderful haiku… 🙂