7 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Fireworks”

1. Dark haiku for the winter, and very dramatic effect.

2. A strong one – soon time for the deep darkness 🙂

3. There is an ominous feel after the fireworks are gone, isn’t there? Nicely captured.

4. Bjorn, Good description of the sudden quiet and darkness. 🙂 — Suzanne

5. So very true…it is almost like a teaser for 20 to 40 minutes of fairy tale skies, then the darkness.

6. Awesome feeling I get of this haiku … I love that deepening of the night after the fireworks.

7. Phew! The sound of darkness descending. You’ve hit a visceral nerve with this one. There’s something primordial in there. It has to do with fire, I think.

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