Carpe Diem Haiku – First Light

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burning light –
behind a wall of clouds
hardly breathing

Linked to Carpe Diem
November 7, 2014

7 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – First Light

  1. Beautiful haiku. I like your haiku because even in this short form, you are able to choose words so carefully that the poem feels complete… sometimes haiku lack depth to me.

  2. i luv the hope implied in this haiku, and the prompt to look beyond, not just accepting what is in near view
    have a good week
    much love…

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