
burning light –
behind a wall of clouds
hardly breathing
Linked to Carpe Diem
November 7, 2014

burning light –
behind a wall of clouds
hardly breathing
Linked to Carpe Diem
November 7, 2014
Writing about living in two places (and times)
Poems & Stories from The Author Stew
practising for a whole life
haikai poetry matters
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
This a really beautiful poem – so soft melody in the haiku.
Bjorn, Lovely. It sounds a bit like the sun on a cloudy day. Well Written. 🙂 — Suzanne
I like this very much…makes me see several meanings, light on the “other side” perhaps.
Beautifully done!
Beautiful haiku. I like your haiku because even in this short form, you are able to choose words so carefully that the poem feels complete… sometimes haiku lack depth to me.
There is great beauty and great mystery in this haiku.
Even in Half-Light
i luv the hope implied in this haiku, and the prompt to look beyond, not just accepting what is in near view
have a good week
much love…