Carpe Diem Haiku – Coolness


hand-fan coolness
sweltering summer relief
sweat stains on her dress

Lady with Veil by Alexander Roslin

Lady with Veil by Alexander Roslin


Linked to Carpe Diem

June 11, 2014

16 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Coolness

  1. So true. I’ve written a few light verses where the last line is a “reality check” on what – at first blush – appears to be close to perfection. And ever since, I find my head going there, often. People are rarely as picture perfect as they might first appear. Great portrait, by the way.

  2. Bjorn, lovely piece with a realistic ending. Beautiful painting. I sometimes wonder how people could stand all the layers of clothing they used to wear in the 19th Century and before. The weather became hot at times then too. No wonder you read of women fainting oftener in those days. 🙂 —Susan

  3. This is a beautiful haiku Bjorn, I love the idea of the lady sitting fanning herself in the torrid summer. (I must admit, that I have several fans that I use and never leave the house without one in the summer.) Quite lovely.

  4. I like the way you have taken such a sweet, romantic image and grounded it in physicality.

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