entangled branches
sun ascends through lifeless limbs
beautiful chaos (Anmol)
glistening gossamer web
a spider waits patiently (Björn)

Illustration. ‘Fairy Tales: Teremok. Mizgir’ by Heorhiy Narbut
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November 11, 2013
sun ascends through lifeless limbs
wow!!! very strong words and awesome!
This reminds me of unknown life-forms losing their limbs from another world that’s beyond our eyes to see but we can beautifully envision its outstanding colors of hope and embrace. 🙂
Bravo! my friend. 🙂
The honor for those phrases are all on howanxious (HA) who… I did the last two lines.
Waits patiently for her dinner!! Nice shift!
A nice visual link from the branches to a web 🙂
Nicely composed second stanza Bjorn … fragility in a strong surrounding. That spider … awesome
nice imagination from the branches to the web , a spider finds a home.
so nicely done……….
Lovely ending. Beautifully done!
Wow!
a very quiet form of chaos
Nice combination Bjorn
Spiders must be some of the most patient creatures on earth!
My Tan Renga Completion
i enjoyed your completion – the word gossamer captured my attention. nice!
Lovely!Enjoyed the dream like feel in the “gossamer” and then the sinister, patient waiting of the spider-ooh!