Writing a haiku inspired by Gary Gay’s haiku:
touched
in the darkness–
by a snowflake
Not an easy task, but I go with the season.
Copyright Björn Rudberg
kissed
by unfaithful winds –
withered leaf
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October 27, 2013
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Now we see through a glass, darkly
rejuvenatement - not retirement
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Simply exquisite.
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Oh! That is a lovely haiku. 🙂
Beautifully sensitive and perfectly poised:-)
“kissed” is brilliant. Wonderful haiku.
evokes a vision of a spurned young woman still holding her head for a kiss, and losing hope…nice
It’s actually inspired partly by a poem in Swedish by poet Hjalmar Gullberg… “kyssande vind” — don’t have a translation. But it sure was at the back of my head.
Nicely done Bjorn … 🙂
Oh those unfaithful winds…they do it every time! 😉
Beautiful.
kissed by… ~ wonderful ~ they sure can be unfaithful ~ happy week to you ~ carol
what a glorious image! I love this.
Perfect!
in the darkness
and there is the sad side of being touched
the end of things at hand
perfect for the fall season Bjorn
You have painted emotionally and visually colourful picture with those few words. Beautiful!
Stunning!
Ow man!