17 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Garry Gay’s “touched””

1. Simply exquisite.

   • Thank you 😉

2. Oh! That is a lovely haiku. 🙂

3. Beautifully sensitive and perfectly poised:-)

4. “kissed” is brilliant. Wonderful haiku.

5. evokes a vision of a spurned young woman still holding her head for a kiss, and losing hope…nice

   • It’s actually inspired partly by a poem in Swedish by poet Hjalmar Gullberg… “kyssande vind” — don’t have a translation. But it sure was at the back of my head.

6. Nicely done Bjorn … 🙂

7. Oh those unfaithful winds…they do it every time! 😉

8. Beautiful.

9. kissed by… ~ wonderful ~ they sure can be unfaithful ~ happy week to you ~ carol

10. what a glorious image! I love this.

11. Perfect!
    in the darkness

12. and there is the sad side of being touched
    the end of things at hand
    perfect for the fall season Bjorn

13. You have painted emotionally and visually colourful picture with those few words. Beautiful!

14. Stunning!

15. Ow man!

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