27 responses to “October walk – tanka

  1. Your tanka illustrates the dichotomy between body and mind so very well, there is the sense of transcience in ‘the dying fall’ and the ‘aware’ is strongly felt in this.

  2. interesting contrasts in this….the walk to standing still…and then the stillness to the mind that is ever racing…in the woods my thoughts often run….

  3. How i like this! It really took me on a deep thought too…. Love the mode and the style too…. Its another challenge for october!

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