the day he dies
regrets lies told –
the wise man weeps
Linked to Carpe Diem
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October 20, 2013
Björn Rudbergs writings
Poetry and fiction by a physicist from the dark side
the day he dies
regrets lies told –
the wise man weeps
Linked to Carpe Diem
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October 20, 2013
A journey through the seasons with two adopted whippets, a poet and a camera
Hoping to inspire the world one word at a time.
2 years, mental illness, bucketlist
Meditations from the Midwest
FICTION by J Teal
Nice thanbauk Bjorn … I did some research on thanbauk and I like this form of poetry very much. I will try this form sometimes I think … Thank you for bringing this form to my attention.
Since I love to write rhymes and meter I like it too.. there are many interesting forms to try.. will come with a surprise again I think
Sad! But a good one!
What a wonderful poetry form. I really enjoyed this one.
so you’re the perpetrator! I found this’ tres difficile’, but you nailed it – well done, Bjorn
Bjorn, I didn’t know about the than bauk form, but you use it to great effect. And as for the man… too late the regrets, for there is no remedy available to the dead man, right? Amy
regrets come too late
great meaning in this Than Bauk
Awesome…like it very much.
Peace
Siggi
sad for the wise man but praise for the Than Bauk creator – well done!