Lake with Castle on a Hill by Joseph Wright
waiting evening –
behind the silver clouds
moon plays peek-a-boo
across the lake
in dreams of moonbeams
waiting evening
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Linked to Carpe Diem
September 18, 2013
Carpe Diem Haiku – Matsuyoi (Waiting Evening)
waiting evening –
behind the silver clouds
moon plays peek-a-boo
Björn Rudbergs writings 
beautiful and dreamy Bjorn
moon play peek-a -boo. I love that line, it’s was whimsical and dreamy.
dreams of, and on, moonbeams….
I like this take on ‘waiting evening’ and in the second verse I sense a touch of ‘ Genji’s Tale’ … really a wonderful haiku. Is it OK that I use that second hàiku in one of the upcoming Tan Renga Challenges? I would be honored.
Of course.. it’s a joy and honour to have my haiku being used,
Both are excellent pieces.
Both lovely but especially adore the second.