21 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Usurai (thin ice)”

1. Your post are so informative. I smiled at the drake and worry about the shrew!

   • 🙂 shrews are shrewd

2. I love the sound of breaking glass….

   • Ahh that’s great

3. these are wonderful
   a narcissus swan

   Cheers!
   JzB

   • Thank you 🙂

4. Dear little shrew, may you find your way back to safety!

   Thin Rind of Ice

   • 🙂

5. a charming story told in a few tangled lines . Perfect 🙂

   • Thank you 🙂

6. Poor mate of the swan 😛

   • Never easy to be a mate of a narcissus mate..

7. Has the shrew been tamed at last?

   • Oh, sir, your wit is on a roll this morning!

     Thin Ice

     • No, the shrew is to shrewd 🙂

8. I enjoyed how each verse made the ice seem more and more glorious

   • Thank you 🙂

9. Wonderful! I like that second haiku … that’s a little gem.

   broken reflection
   the sun makes thin ice fluid
   no more mirror

   • Great one. Yes poor swan mate might get some attention 🙂

10. I feel in love with the shrew, but then the 2nd is really classic in feeling.
    Really beautiful set of haiku.

11. ha – the proud drake
    nice set
    I’m ready for spring

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