Carpe Diem Haiku – strangers

Prompt today in Carpe Diem is strangers.

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strangers on the train
alone but close together
smartphone company
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smartphone company
never meet the strangers
sitting very close
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no strangers
meeting every day
writing haiku



February 26, 2013

18 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – strangers

  1. wouldn’t it be amazing if you looked at someone else’s phone and realised they were writing haiku as you were. now you raise an interesting question, are online friends really strangers? I don’t think so.

  2. Nice … People making shows. Giving impressions. Even on the train. It is a sad story. And a symptom, I think, on the illness of the modern society where all are counted and explained. That is my reflection on your first haiku. But I love them all.

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