Carpe Diem Haiku – strangers

Prompt today in Carpe Diem is strangers.

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strangers on the train
alone but close together
smartphone company
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smartphone company
never meet the strangers
sitting very close
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no strangers
meeting every day
writing haiku


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February 26, 2013

18 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – strangers”

  1. wouldn’t it be amazing if you looked at someone else’s phone and realised they were writing haiku as you were. now you raise an interesting question, are online friends really strangers? I don’t think so.

  2. Nice … People making shows. Giving impressions. Even on the train. It is a sad story. And a symptom, I think, on the illness of the modern society where all are counted and explained. That is my reflection on your first haiku. But I love them all.

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