27 responses to “Repair again”

1. A creative take on the prompt, Bjorn!

   • Thanks… it was a very quick write

     • You are welcome!

2. I really like your enjambment on this one.

   • Thank you.. enjambment with rhymes is something I like from time to time

3. I also like the enjambment, Björn.

   • Thank you

4. Great take Björn, I like how you move from isolation to comfort, and ultimately shared resilience🙌

   • We need to get strength from somewhere

5. You’ve captured my tears with:

   screen me with your kindness

   In a world that grows increasingly callous, kindness is soul balm.

   • We need those spaces I think

6. When over-filled with world’s troubles, kindness can help repair us. You offer hope in the darkness.

   • We all need some rest

7. In a world of much troubled times it’s such a salvation to be accorded kindness on offer! Nice thoughts Bjorn!

   Hank

   • Kindness is the best refuge

8. I like the idea of kindness battling piercing fear!

   • Kindness is a shield indeed

9. “screen me with your kindness” – love that line. Nicely done poem.

   • Thank you so much

10. Lovely use of screen as verb

    • I prefer verbs to nouns actually

11. I think it is very clever to be able to rhyme a Quadrille, and also pay attention to rhythm, while sticking to the correct word number.

    • Thank you.. it is a bit like doing suduko… a puzzle to play

12. Yup, let’s go battle some evil, Björn! I’m in the mood! 🙂

    • Kindness is a great tool

13. Team work in thwarting the darkness that consumes.

14. So strongly are the right of the fetus to live only to be left to starve to death or become a pedo’s pleasure toy. Or the target of bombs and guns. Yes, let us gather and fight side by side.