Leaves in fall

It is what leaves in fall, the geese, the light, the warmth of the sun and leaves that fall. It is what comes with force, the wind, the rain and kiss of frost. It is in fall we turn inside, lighting candles; resting by the fireplace. We long for dawn, we long for what has left to turn back again. We cuddle up, and remember how we were falling in love.

fall of an acorn
fleeing from squirrels’ yearning —
becoming an oak

Autumn Landscape
Vincent van Gogh

Today Mish hosts dVerse haibun Monday and she asks us to write haibun about fall in all the ways it can be.

19 responses to “Leaves in fall

  1. Autumn in a nutshell, Björn: ‘the geese, the light, the warmth of the sun and leaves that fall’. I love the kiss of frost, the lighting of candles, the romantic ending – and the acorn becoming an oak. Which reminds me, there was a great programme about a year in the life of an oak tree on BBC4 yesterday.

  2. A perfect capture of early autumn–the turning inward and the falling, but also the comfort inside.

    Our squirrels are very busy–there are lots of acorns and other nuts around.

  3. I like the juxtaposition between the final line of the paragraph and the final line of the haiku. It’s an interesting comparison. I like the development that’s going on between the two parts of the poem.

    We cuddle up, and remember how we were falling in love / becoming an oak

  4. Nice play on leaves, and the contrast of leaving and arriving, this leaves me with a sense of the northern winter being quite a force to contend with. I love the turning in and remembering how we were falling in love …

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