Doodles in dust

He talks with the shelves, as if
their shadows would brighten

to gold; he mumbles in meter,
enchantments, entrapping, from

ink, the ghosts from its tomes,
scholars deceased, the poets

of unwritten verse, the muses
confusing his hands His rambles

are veiled with substances lost
to gluttonous dreams of springtime

delusions born to the hoarfrost
of April. He whispers the songs,

the lullabled ache of mothers
to sons lost in stories of trees.

He whimpers adieu to spectres
of pulp, bleeding the letters of

names he has found; he doodles
in dust what remains to be lost.

Doodles in dust – digital art created with Bing

Today Sanaa inspires us to write in the style of poet Maggie Smith at dVerse. I am not sure that I did it right, but whenever I cannot find inspiration I go to the library and talk the aged librarian, and this is what he suggested with a blankverse arranged in couplets.

April 16, 2024

37 responses to “Doodles in dust

  1. What is lost to us is not lost to him — Magnificent poem, Björn, and the aged librarian’s inspiration has struck every poetic chord just right!

  2. This is gorgeously rendered, Bjorn! I especially love this part; “His rambles are veiled with substances lost to gluttonous dreams of springtime delusions born to the hoarfrost of April.”

    Thank you so much for writing to the prompt 🩷🩷

  3. I love reading this series Bjorn. Specially, admire the mumblings in meter and enchantments and this part too: 

    He whispers the songs,

    the lullabled ache of mothers
    to sons lost in stories of trees.

  4. I’m going to bore you by saying again and again how much I enjoy your librarian poems, Björn, and this one is great. I love the way the aged librarian converses with shelves – they are old friends by now and I wouldn’t be surprised if they talk back. I particularly love the lines:

    ‘enchantments, entrapping, from
    ink, the ghosts from its tome’

    and

    ‘He whimpers adieu to spectres
    of pulp, bleeding the letters of
    names he has found; he doodles
    in dust what remains to be lost.’

  5. Another wise wordsmithing from the aged librarian! I think we all are doodling in dust… just wondering if you meant “lullabied” ache of mothers??

  6. I love that you recited “everything” the old Librarian shared with you!! Perfect .. the Art too.

  7. Yes indeed – love your Librarian poems Björn -“scholars deceased, the poets ”
    of unwritten verse”…

  8. Interesting, a fun one to read. I like your lines with the ghost and the “the poets of unwritten verse” as a favorite. Hard to choose, all done really well.

    ..

  9. I feel a sense of magic in this, lovely to read…I love the last lines…

    He whimpers adieu to spectres
    of pulp, bleeding the letters of

    names he has found; he doodles
    in dust what remains to be lost.

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