Today — a portal

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both – Robert Frost

What if — today
is crossroad-different,
a path diverging,
maybe mountainwards
or deeper valleywards
into forests or back home.
instead of leading
on and further onwards — straight?

What if — today
you have a choice to turn leeway
instead of being helm-tied
with the pole-star burning brightly
for the curse of course,
the damned direction
you’ve been born to keep?

What if — today
there is a portal opened skyward
leading upwards from the ennui
of being shackled
to the gravity of yore and to the dun of yesterday?

What if – tomorrow
is bright instead of being
grey and quarrelsome
like today?

Crossroads Grey by Leon Polk Smith

Today Anmol hosts at dVerse on the subject of portals, to me, a portal (of interest) has to be a choice or opportunity that leads you to something different from where you are.

May 19, 2020

32 responses to “Today — a portal

  1. I really like the refrain of ‘What if’ and how that corresponds to what you feel about portals. There are many options here to choose from. Well-penned, Björn! 🙂

  2. I’m with Anmol – ‘What if’ works so well as a refrain, an echo through the portals, and I see what you mean about Robert Frost and that road not taken, Björn. I also, like Laura, like the contrasts, especially the lines:
    ‘you have a choice to turn leeway
    instead of being helm-tied
    with the pole-star burning brightly
    for the curse of course’
    and I love:
    ‘What if – tomorrow
    is bright instead of being
    grey and quarrelsome
    like today?’

  3. This is flipping incredible, Bjorn! Way to go!

    Sheesh, these sections are amazing:

    “crossroad-different”

    “instead of being helm-tied
    with the pole-star burning brightly
    for the curse of course,
    the damned direction
    you’ve been born to keep”

    “there is a portal opened skyward
    leading upwards from the ennui
    of being shackled
    to the gravity of yore”

  4. The third part is my favorite Bjorn. I specially love sudden twist and many possibilities of tomorrow, from today.

    What if — today
    there is a portal opened skyward

  5. “Staying home” is a choice, and a damned good one. Venturing out bareback into the pestilence and contagion is like playing hopscotch on the freeway. This is a poem of/for hope, and the wordsmithing is excellent.

  6. kaykuala

    The last stanza gives it a semblance of salvation, a nearness to it being possible, not something that is not readily able to be saved!

    Hank

  7. What if portals are openings to improbabilities and your questions are the keys to unlock them? This is so powerful!

  8. Really like this poem – particularly the use of all kinds of directions
    I’m so glad you didn’t stick to crossroads but took us to other configurations – lots of fresh imagery here. Favorite lines:

    “helm-tied
    with the pole-star burning brightly
    for the curse of course,
    the damned direction
    you’ve been born to keep?”

  9. There is some great word play here, Björn. I see these as questions that likely can’t be answered until the moment those options are faced.

  10. mmmh I like your definition of a ‘portal’, very thought provoking!

    Your poem is deeply reflective, doubtful yet hopeful at the same time …

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