17 responses to “Commuters coming home a Monday in November

  1. This is so perfectly imagist the tail-lights and fireflies have imprinted themselves on my retina and I can’t get the image out of my head! It reminds me of going home in the dark on the top deck of a bus when I was little and watching the lights of cars going over a bridge and across the common.

  2. Nice two line poems, Bjorn. We also have a lot of taillights as people got caught in the road flooding here again today in Houston. So far it hasn’t gone into many homes but it is supposed to continue until the weekend.

  3. Do the fireflies once captured ever dream of freedom again, or have they resigned themselves to the limitations of their captivity?

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