Bring me your sunrise
and in evening winks of your moon.
Bring me a mile of your laughter
and candyflossed words.
Bring me a bat of your lashes
and a forest of skin.
Bring joy in yourself,
and melt in the fervor of two.
The kiss by Auguste Rodin
A second quadrille for De at dVerse. Also linking to Tuesday Platform at toads
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November 5, 2018
Running in the slow lane
The view from here ... Or here!
“Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving.” — Albert Einstein
chronicling my quarter life crisis
Now we see through a glass, darkly
rejuvenatement - not retirement
words and scribble.
The Quantumverse
Poetry, haiku. Life, word play, puns, free verse
About fantastical places and other stuff
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I love those “candyflossed words,” especially!
Ah yes, indeed, the trappings, the mantle of love–all encompassing, blinding, erotic and sensual trumping intellect.
This is WONDERFUL! A loving invitation.
Sweet. What are “winks of your moon”? Is that like mooning?
Ha.. yes it could be.
lol
Oh, I love all of this!
Candyflossed words is eye-catching and reading always a pleasure
Oooh, nice and unexpected ending!
Love the title and each verse of gifts.
Nice phrase: “mile of your laughter”
a forest of skin is so sinfully delightful
oh, gosh. this piece, Bjorn. ❤
This is wonderfully sensuous Bjorn! ❤
Nice lines he has, Bjorn. And he’s pretty sure they will bring a happy situation, saying this mildly. We have a Country and Western song, you may have heard this oldie, “We got married in a fever, hotter than a pepper sprout
We’re goin’ to Jackson.”
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love the “bat of your lashes” pun turning a cliche on it’s head while sustaining sensuality – bravo , lovely poem
Need joy in yourself to bring it to a marriage…love the phrase “a mile of your laughter”.
I love the end of this. The first two lines are perfection.
A true delight! Love this Bjorn!
Ahh–love this love poem!
Sweet!!!
kaykuala
Bring joy in yourself,
and melt in the fervor of two.
Isn’t this the eventual proposition, the ultimate? Always love a grand ending!
Hank
What a delightful poem!! I enjoyed it alot.
Bjorn Thanks for your comment on my poem.
All these little gifts that we can give. So beautiful.
Sheer bliss! Wonderfully done!