Deeper

not even the stars
can spill such silvery lure —
eyes brimming with mirth,
nightgown slipping from shoulder
leading me deeper than ever

Temptation by Odilon Redon

Today we are writing short poetry at dVerse with Frank. Not more that 5 lines for instance limerick cinquain or tanka.

February 15, 2018

41 responses to “Deeper

  1. Now *that* is a hot poem.

    I honestly think a brevity prompt *should* birth some of the best poetry out there. I hope they’re all killer. I’d expect nothing less from your expert crew.

  2. Oh…this is so sensuous…..the lure of the stars…and the shift to the nightgown slipping from the shoulder….such a sensuous scene you’ve drawn here.

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  4. kaykuala

    nightgown slipping from shoulder
    leading me deeper than ever

    One thing leads to the other

    Hank

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