18 responses to “belladonna eyes

  1. between the lipstick
    and the smoke smell…

    I just hope its the right woman,
    cause otherwise, you might be in trouble.

  2. Damn, this is tight.

    I guess the question means you’d prefer the lipstick somewhere else. Or that you’re wearing a different kind of collar.

  3. That is an intriguing pivot line. Brilliant tanka … everything that an absorbing tanka should be. Loved it!

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