If stirred is shaken, wine is dine
is thighs in tights a slip of sleight
and jazz; and jazz or said as she.
Is height unbroken chandeliers!
It is mostly is it less her hands.
It is; it is; a frozenly from bad
is had not taken atmospheres.
A second entry for Paul’s great prompt at dVerse. Throw the grammar aside and have fun with us.
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October 3, 2017
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A serious bit of inebriation here?!
Yes… dropping all sense and grammar.
😀😀
Oh this is a dance alright. Jazz man!
Jazzman jasmine sashay
Jazz is always welcome! You caught the age nicely.
Fantastic!! Am going to have to try my hand at this.
Great fun to read. Loved tripping over some of those word combinations! >
So cool.
Love these:
“is thighs in tights a slip of sleight
and jazz”
“Is height unbroken chandeliers!”
“It is; it is; a frozenly from bad”
The word play is great. Next time I do one one of these.. I shall wine and dine !
Splendid !!! This was cheerful
I like how you combine some rhyme and rhythm with a new way of arranging words…it all adds to the picture, the moment.