19 responses to “Still life

  1. I love your ‘jar of moonshine’ and a few of us have been inspired by distillery metaphors on this trail – wishing you well across the miles :o)

  2. Ha. Triple X moonshine. That’s hilarious. 🙂

    “the sheriff does not know the thrill” … This is my favorite line. Because of all those X’s, I’m making Brian the sheriff. And in the last hanging line, I see “dissed, illed” … or “I/eye led.” Or “med is tilled,” “me d is tilled.” I put De in every poem that I possibly can. 😛

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