When you butterfly
on earlobes,
mindless I am tossed
as you dress my chest in
mane of yours.
Then you tongue my cheek,
lip-sip spit and
flurry me on fingertips.
We upside down
and inside out
we meat, we merge
we sweat.
My back striated, nailed
I marble-pillar
you beneath,
above within, and speared
you firework with me.
Rolla by Henri Gevrex
Today Lillian prompt us to verbify nouns at dVerse something I think work best with erotica.
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January 24, 2017
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I am a voyeur — your luxuria spills from the page into the mind of the reader.
This is so much deeper than erotica.
“you beneath,
above within”
Every part is my favorite … no phrase rises above another; it’s all so well crafted.
Wow! Your nouns verbified certainly work here, Björn
whoooosh! 🙂 You’ve nailed it…especially with “butterfly.” I wonder if others will use erotica here? I’ve used fingertips and written of love. Mine is a bit more reserved? 🙂 Looking forward to what others write!
quite the vivid imagery!
Wow. I dimly remember some of that. I love the way you fluttered words in this poem in such a unique way.
Super sensual, brother, rocking the prompt and the boudoir. This “verbifying nouns” is quite the trip.
You can verbify adjectives as well.
Whoa, my comment slipped into the hands of cyber gnomes it seems, so try, try again; smile, Your piece is super-sensual, rocked the prompt & the boudoir–and yes, you “nailed” both; giggle. Verbifying nouns is a ton of fun, for sure.
Nope you made it twice 🙂
It’s so interesting that you use erotica to verbify nouns… this makes me think that there is something almost sexual about this process. Very interesting.
I will never see a firework in the same way after writing this.
Goodness me! It’s amazing what a little verbification can do? With a name similar to califonication I suppose it’s only to be expecteD! 🙂
Phew! This is jam-packed with such sensuality. The verbification just brings it to life!
**fans self**
HEAVENS.
**goes back and reads it again**
Oh, my…
“I marble-pillar
you beneath”
Well that was a read…such wonderfully imaginative writing…simply sensational
Bjorn … you rogue!! Great take on the prompt and a brilliant and um vivid piece of writing 😉
Smoking hot! *Fans herself* 😀
This just seems right
Nouns have never being moved to verb so erotically. What a rush, Bjorn–sexy words, sexy movement, sexy images. I can see them being and loving… and I don’t mind it one bit. 😉
That’s so interesting ..converting the nouns to verbs..very nicely done.
oooo, la, la!
Nice use of new verbs, Bjorn. I hadn’t read this type writing from you before, a fun read, and fun write, I’m sure.
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Wow! Smoldering… you may need to get a public rating for that one. haha… excellent and sensual work my friend, excellent!
Those verbifications really add to the headiness of it all. It’s a great piece.
Sadly, it makes all comments read like double entendres…
Love your verbing! Really good.
The nouns as verbs works exceedingly well in this poem. I think the third stanza is a marvel on its own.. really well done.
Love this! Very creative and perfect for the prompt (I might have to try to find time for this one).
I love the first stanza and these as verbs: “lip-sip spit” and “upside down.”
Sensuality exquisitely stated…beautiful
delightful romp
This poem actually reminded me of how more than one person in my life described their love lives in a specific place in the house or otherwise reminds them of fireworks.
I like that the poem feels joyous and gentle.
verbification is indeed sensual and you proved that here
Wow, I like the freedom of expression here. Love how you used “upside down” and “inside out” as verbs.
Ha! Hot stuff!
wow! love it!
Reads like a ribald seduction! Wonderful!
Sizzling 😛
Really hot, Bjorn! Loved it.
The wording in this is wonderful … the construction – the ‘build’ within the piece – is superbly drawn.
Hahaaaa
Rightly said
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Erotica series #1 💋
This is the post excerpt.
https://eroticaseries.wordpress.com/2017/03/06/first-blog-post/