Breath-
less whispers
spark me verses
shimmer,
breeze o’roses,
leaves o’green,
curl my toes.
You spill me grins
bubble
open shadows
melt my scars
You skip,
you dance my heart.
unjar
uncloud me,
spill me stars in green-
twist sheen.
You — my cue
to journey far.
Spring Breeze by William-Adolphe Bouguereau
44 words with all the quadrille words so far. Come whisper with us at dVerse.
January 16, 2017
Björn Rudbergs writings 
“spark me verses,
breath” — YES.
Yours makes much more sense than mine does. 😉 How long before “the ones with all the words” become something straight out of the Jabberwocky, I wonder? 😉
Ha… yes it’s a problem
The words in your verses to speak to me in whispers of creative forces that are making me feel comfortable in their own right. 🙂
Excellent work my friend. 🙂
The way you have used the Q words bring a lot of light, I love this! :o)
Great voice in this, spill me grins, ye did!
Hmmmm…the one with all the words again….’ponders dat’
See my comment backatcha over at my place, Paul. And take up the challenge!
Cripes!!!!!!
You…cued all the words Bjorn ~ Love this one ~
Inspired! ❤️
Really well done…all those words. Once we hit 44 quadrille, then the challenge really takes over.
“spark me verses,
breath”
oooh. lyrical! 🙂
Ooh, creative — using the o’s like that.
This is my favorite section:
“open shadows
melt my scars
You skip,
you dance my heart.
unjar
uncloud me”
So, because of the “curl my toes” line especially, I find this to be a quite sexy invitation … to be loud. Then the “cue to journey far” at the end makes me think of a fairy tale story, where you’re heading out to rescue the princess from a dragon or something. 🙂
Absolutely lovely!
Melt my scars – just beautiful!
Quite the feat to use all the quadrille words so far….love the use of “unjar” and the last two lines in particular 🙂
this made my heart
dance
skip!!
Gorgeously wrought!
So much through so few……beautiful!!…..