Hear song of tits and
crow of cocks, when
from the bushes hidden
gold from bitch
is snatched
by thieving magpie.
While spring is wile
tectonic with temptation,
blue, seductive lisp
vile, your lips,
lucid, formed around
a pressure pent,
before the firework.
Two great tits
Michael wants us to use “filthy” words from “George Carlin, 7 Dirty Words” at toads, I might have bent it a little, but hear is as much as I dared to publish on my site.
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May 20, 2016
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Very cleverly done!
Tectonic with temptation… Love it!
I cannot stop giggling.
Well worked within the parameters.
Just adore this–we must think alike. I thought when I saw the title that it could be really fowl! And feathered. If only I can find time to write to this challenge.
Love what you did here with the “dirty” words — fitting them into nature. Witty and fun — loved this prompt, as it took us “out of the box” I think. Thanks for sharing.
Love your fun take on this, B! 🙂
I can’t believe I missed this prompt! The title caught my eye as I browsed on my Kindle and I realused it was you, Bjorn.You had some fun with this😄
Clever, clever, clever! I also Love the picture – birds have so much to say 🙂
The words get a little heavy to say, filthy as it is but not quite. Chuckles! Tinged with humor certainly!
Hank
Oh I love your interpretation of the prompt!
ha! love this, Bjorn ~
Love your play on words in this. Saw the first blue tit while in Europe.
Touché! Adroitly wordsmithed – clever and droll.