We travel on the Milky Way
through (and with)
the broken sixth dimension.
Space around the flightdeck
breathe on stars inhaled
as nebulae reflect
inside eleven eyes,
and humming deep inside
of vessel-warp reactors.
Our mission is to go
further further
than the boldly of beyond
you tickle me below.
Space Station (Falls Said to be the Largest in the Known World So Far) by Landon Mackenzie
A second star poem for dVerse poetics. This time it’s a Sci-Fi inspired writing because tomorrow it’s time for the new Star Wars movie.
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December 15, 2015
Björn Rudbergs writings 
I love this!!! The last line was a hilarious surprise.
Great fun!
I love how this poem is inspired and written around the time for the movie 😀 Excellent write.
Oooh..I sense a touch of the physicist in this. For me, the marriage of science and poetry yields some wonderful offspring. This is an example. And love the reference to Star Wars.
The ending made me smile ~ I am also looking forward to the next Star Trek for the boldly beyond ~
Magnificent images. I want to go flying on that fourth dimension!
I like this poem. In metaphysics the 6th dimension is the dimension of the creative imagination. It’s interesting that you intuitively see it as broken – a telling commentary of the negativity that obsesses so many at present perhaps. 🙂
Love the way you infused sci-fi with a bit of fun. A very cool little piece.
To boldly go to that galaxy far far away in the dimension of our creativity. And the light ending did indeed make me smile, being tickled below. The brain is indeed the greatest of sex organs. Thank you for this poem from one who is from the “dark side”, smiles.
love the mix of sci-fi and ambiguity. That last line was a lot of fun!!
how current and yet futuristic. love the ticklish ending
Love, love, love anything to do with space. That last line tickled me!
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I hope Star Wars don’t break out while the latest mission is on its way to the Space Station!
a fun write 🙂
I watched the launch into space, yesterday, of the British astronaut who is joining the ISS. I struck me how we have never lost our fascination with the ‘final frontier’.
Cracked me up no end. 😀 >
I do wonder if some day this kind of travel will be possible. I don’t think we can ever say NEVER. The ending really changed the plot line though. Smiles.
Love your sci-fi take on the prompt, Bjorn…fun! I look forward to that new movie too.
Oh! That last stanza made me giggle, and then blush. 😉
Such a different stance on the stars! Enjoy the movie. I might have to see it in Spanish!
Interesting
Very fanciful and other-worldly, Bjorn. I read that the new Star Wars movie’s going to be a success. 🙂 — Suzanne