My laughing hell
is puke of rollercoaster thrills
it is sticky candy-floss
clinging to your carious teeth.
It is the ferris wheel that stops
when you reached the top
It is the spin of lucky wheels
where purple teddy bears are
frisking you for coins.
It is tepid beer gone stale
It is degrading popcorn stains
on your trousers’ crotch
It is the kiss she never gives
My laughing hell
is everything you lost
because you lacked the fare.
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October 22, 2015
Björn Rudbergs writings 
The sea sick feeling of a fun ride gone so very wrong. I really like the feel of this poem.
yuck, the worst parts of the fair…
the purple stuffed animals frisking your coin
and you dont even get the kiss..
all the promise
without the pay off…
Oh, that sticky candy floss sticking to one’s teeth would be a nightmare indeed. I really can’t do ‘sickeningly sweet’ any more.
Feeling like crap – in a sea of forced gaiety – is a form of hell, unique onto itself.
So many times life is like this…we are forced into a false gaiety and what is supposed to be fun is ugly with no hope of getting better. this is quite a feeling of a poem.
i am happy laughing away in that hell. Well written 🙂
Fare Enough , mate , sounds like a crap day out !
i feel your disappointment
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much love…
interesting…yes!
It’s life.. and life is one big rollercoaster full of ups and downs and we win some and we lose some. It’s exciting at times, and other times, it’s scary.. but still all we can do is buckle up and hold on tight.. Job well done Bjorn!
Yep, just another good reason to stand clear of roller coasters and rides that make you…. Yikes.
Well done
Sounds like a fun park gone wrong, Bjorn. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
Sounds like the one who lacked the fare didn’t really lose after all.
Each one of these is its own kind of hell. The worst would be the roller coaster that stops when it reaches the top. Yikes!! That would be a nightmare.
Well done and oh so icky…
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Our personal hells can be so peculiar… and sticky, obviously.
My Magpie entry
Sadly, we all have to experience such hell…
Hope the hell gets converted to heaven & we get all what we wish!