16 responses to “Carpe diem Haiku – Onomatopoeia”

1. cold
   ~
   chills

2. Brrrrrrr….wonderful! Slip slidey….

3. That’s worth a shiver.
   Cheers!
   JzB

4. Wonderful composition Björn.

5. And that would awaken one!

6. Wonderful title: that scene – very Onomatopoeia-ish, I think. Smiles.

7. I can feel it sliding down my back. :0)

8. The susurration in this haiku is sssimpy sswell.

9. Zing! That will wake a person very quickly, won’t it?
   Wonderful 😀

10. Ach … now you’ve put a chill on me! 🙂

11. Love!

12. Superb!

13. (◕‿◕｡) that was cooooldddddd brr

    much love…

14. Chilling.

15. I can surely feel that icy kiss here! Makes me shiver.

16. That can’t be comfortable, Bjorn. Well written. 🙂 — Suzanne

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