7 responses to “Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Jen’s “canyon wind””

1. A fine Tan Renga Bjorn. I feel the warm desert breeze and the hiss in the distance.

2. Poetry with a bite to it!

3. Kirizar is right — quite a bite to your tan renga!!! So glad NOT to have met that fellow on the path, that’s for sure!

   Nicely done —

4. Bjorn, Beautiful snake, but I don’t want to meet it in person. Well written. 🙂 — Susan

5. Respect for all beings I say. In this case, huge respect at as far a distance as possible! 🙂

6. I channelled an auditory vibe here . . . and an expectation that the snake will, at some point be heard from. (Maybe it’s the rattle in the name.) Wisps of onamonapia – though I know it doesn’t fit the term exactly.

7. I particularly like the image of ‘lapping midday sun’ – it brings to mind the flickering tongue and the sense that the snake is indulging himself.

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