Carpe Diem Tan Renga – Dolores’ Curtain of light

· by · in poetry, tan renga. ·


Dolores starts out by this haiku, on Northern Light

curtain of light
shimmers in the winter cold
flight of fancy

And our task is to complement it with two lines..

curtain of light
shimmers in the winter cold
flight of fancy
brittle notes like crushing glass
pilgrims reach the mountain hut


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Decemeber 20, 2014

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