17 responses to “Carpe Diem – a dream within a dream

  1. I really enjoyed this interpretation, Bjorn — it would have worked well as a haiku, but when you add those two lines to make it a tanka it becomes that much more poignant and even softly sensual — “waves caress your shore” —

    Great tanka 😀

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