evening mist
memories are fading
loon is calling
solace for a broken heart
the night’s velvet blanket
forgetfulness –
cinder on my pillow
as night is cold
our footsteps in the sand
are dying in the waves
My haiga from yesterday is selected by Kristiaan of Carpe Diem for a Tan Renga Squared. Interesting to develop my thoughts a little further.
Björn Rudbergs writings 
Ah…very very nice Bjorn, fine job on your haiku there.
Beautiful 🌾🍃🌾🍃🌾
I don’t think I’ve ever heard a loon, you make me regret it.
Very atmospheric and gothic-like. I get a feeling of aging and gloom. I love it, LOL!
Forgetfulness as a cinder on one’s pillow — this is a striking image. I’m so glad you were able to develop your thoughts a bit further.
You did a nice job prolonging your own haiku Björn … and turned it into a great four stanza renga …
Bjorn, Rather sad piece. Good continuation of you first piece. 🙂 —Susan
“cinder on my pillow”
everything turns on that line
what a stark and brutal image
beautifully done
namste
JzB
such melancholical images … the sadness of autumn
la sera passerà
l’autunno arriva ora
senza tregua
Indeed, the sadness of autumn and endings.