Carpe Diem Haiku – Jim Kacian’s “falling leaves”


Jim’s haiku is:

falling leaves
the house comes
out of the wood

My answer is:

hello horizon! –
with first autumn storm
foliage leaves

I sometimes have a great sense of freedom when the suffocating canopies are bare again. Somehow there is a freedom here, that I feel strongly in Jim’s haiku.

Paysage à Crozant by Armand Guillaumin

Paysage à Crozant by Armand Guillaumin


Linked to Carpe Diem

August 16, 2014

10 responses to “Carpe Diem Haiku – Jim Kacian’s “falling leaves”

  1. these two flow nicely together. I admit, while I love the colors of spring, there is something about the bare limbs reaching up to the sky and opening up the landscape that is quite entrancing.

  2. There’s great freedom after the first autumn storm, that’s for sure. It can be a not of a shock though too. Great haiku – loved the accompanying painting too – hadn’t heard of this artist. 🙂

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