Jack Kerouac wrote:
early morning gentle rain,
two big bumblebees
humming at their work
My answer is an american sentence:
Office workers morning rush to the rhythmic sound of jackhammers
I thought about George Gershwin and Rhapsody in blue when writing this. If you have time, watch the Fantasia version.
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May 15, 2014

Poor Jack! How could he have known about jackhammers, I wonder …?! 😀
I really enjoy anything from Fantasia –
Jackhammers – a definite buzz of the city.
If Jack lived in Ozone Park, Queens NY I am sure he knew of Jack Hammers.
Cheers ~Jules
Wonderful American Sentence Bjorn
Bjorn, Good poem and good music. I enjoyed both. —Susan
after Alan Ginsberg…very modern
Jack and Alen were good friends I think..
fantastic!
love the poem!
The sound of the jackhammers may be rhythmic, but I would also find it annoying! (Good single sentence, sir!)
Bribing Bumblebees