gathering seashells
while ocean tide rise and falls
two sisters bicker (Sun)
footsteps lost in tidal wave
as he left them both alone (Björn)
Gathering shells by Eugene de Blaas
Amazing – I googled for paintings and found a perfect one, only to see that Sun had exactly the same picture. he he..
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November 23, 2013
Björn Rudbergs writings 
🙂 lost in tidal wave… i’m going to think smart person not to tangle with the sisters 😆 i love it, Bjorn and perfect image too. ha-ha.
Awesome Bjorn … what to say more? 🙂
nice and obviously an apt illustration 🙂
I’d leave them to their bickering as well. In fact I have. It is the perfect illustration.. and an apt completion. 🙂
Well done, friend! Did anyone ever tell you, you have a delightful way with words?:)
A little perhaps.. but on this I always read it aloud nowadays instead of counting syllables… but this one ended up almost iambic which I guess is a big no-no for haiku
There is a nice story in your words … love it 🙂
I’m wondering who “he” is…or was…
Deep Waters Recede
My thought was the man the sisters where bickering about ..
my mind went directly to the Philippines…..but that can’t be what they’re fighting about, can it….
Very nice. Sometimes all you can do is walk away.
Good thing he left them alone!
Delightfully apt Bjorn-though this has sad undertones,it made me laugh-wicked me!