A haiku by Rheumatologe completed to tanka by me
this dark autumn night
the bright stars of milky way
cries of geese above Lothar (Rheumatologe)
pouring from the big dipper
starlight that rinse my soul Björn
Linked to Carpe Diem
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November 12, 2013

Rinsing soul… really nice. 🙂
Exquisitely beautiful Björn! 🙂
Thank you Penny… you should try the Tan Renga…
Thanks, I have thought about it … some …
Lovely line ~ starlight rinse my soul ~ carol, xxx
ah the words we whisper beneath the stars. Beautiful Bjorn
I’m so glad that somebody brought the Big Dipper into the tan renga. Delightful!
My Tan Renga Completion
I love the tipping and washing of the big dipper full of stars!
Nice. I like the rinsing of a soul with stars. Beautiful.
sublime poetry, Bjorn
That’s an amazing image almost doing justice to your words Bjorn 😉
This Dark Autumn Night
reading your lines, just makes me feel wonderful
much love…
Awesome cômpletion Bjorn … very nicely done.
Very mystic.
Cheers!
JzB.
Gorgeous Bjorn!!
A great line ‘starlight that rinsed my soul’
oh, cleansing starlight! I love this one.
oh, this is so delightfully nice – magical ♥
rinse your soul. Oh how I wish that it was an easy endeavor.
Loved your words.
♥
wonderful completion
Peace
Siggi
Oh,how delightful!Loved this completion Bjorn:-)
lovely!