The butterfly counts not months but moments, and has time enough – Rabindranath Tagore
I had walked through more valleys, crossed more streams and climbed more passes than I cared to remember. At the end of my life there was only one brief moment worth to member. I sat down and knew that I would not rise again, my journey had came to an end.
I remembered the rainy evening I had come to the little village in the forgotten valley. I could still recall the emerald color of the little pond, and the perfectly pink waterlilies dancing gracefully to the melody of the falling rain.
Right before I came into the village I saw a family of travellers huddling under the shelter of large oak. Their eyes told the story of being shut out from society, shunned as gypsies and thieves.
I was not in a hurry but the rain soaked through my clothes. I still remember the moment when, I for an instant, looked into the eyes of the young daughter. This was the moment my life could have turned, but I continued to walk, and I know that only she saw my brief hesitation.
I saw how her eyes changed from curiosity and hope to loathing and contempt.
If I had but stayed a little bit longer, sat down and talked, I know that the path of my life would have been different, and like butterflies we would have seen infinity together.
Now I sit here looking at the same village, after many years I’m back, my life is gone, and I have all the time in the world to wait under the oak tree. I see a young man coming down the road, and he stops by me and sits down.
We share my last bit of bread in silence and then he says:
“My grandmother always told me to look for you here, she is waiting for you now”
I smiled, and looked him deep into the same eyes that defined the only time I had time enough. I laid down and closed my eyes.
I was home.
as the butterfly
savours each moment of life
we die happy

Mountain Path, Crimea by Ivan Shishkin
Linked to Ligo Haibun
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September 29, 2013
A round about way of things coming as one, choices we make can’t lead to a double take
Indeed it can..
‘we would have seen infinity together.’ it sums it all.
i wish I had thought of it 😉
Thank you – I see that as high praise
What a wonderful tale. Beautiful and captures the prompt so wonderfully.
Thank you Anja.. 🙂
Love the way you portrayed the quote in your story. Beautiful. Love it. 🙂
Thank you so much..
Bjorn the butterfly. That sounds about right. Happy. …even though. Home is always the best end.
Beautifully woven tale.
Well done Björn, very, very well done. 🙂
what a wonderful haibun tale. a beautiful, flowing moment. ♥
The narrative spoke so much. The narrator attained peace at last
Beautiful and haunting narrative.
This reminds me of a film I watched recently, ‘Mr Nobody’. It is haunting and beautiful, much like this haibun. Butterflies have a particular and personal meaning for me, a link between me and my lovely dad. Thank you for sharing this.
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I actually had goose bumps reading the ending. Your writing engages the reader completely.
Thank you..