Carpe Diem Tan Renga to write a completion to the wonderful haiku by HA
the paper lanterns
float away to neverland
pure light of spirits
Chanel no 5 by Andy Warhol
the paper lanterns
float away to neverland
pure light of spirits
dissipating cross the bay
like my grandmother’s perfume
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September 13, 2013
very nice!
Thank you 🙂
Oh! grandmother’s perfume. So creative… very nice. 🙂
Thank you.. I wanted a little tanka contrast thinking here.
Nice! I like this…:)
Some very, very special haiku coming from you these days Bjorn, each time, You snatched the pebble!
This is haunting. I can smell the Chanel.
Excelllent.
Wow … Awesome … what a joy to read this completion of the Tan Renga Bjorn … it touches me deep and I can visualize the sight and the feeling. My grandmother used Boldoot (kind of eau de cologne) and sometimes the elderly people whom I care for have that Boldoot also. It faints away if they walk along … then I always have to think about my grandmom.
i love this one.