Carpe Diem haiku – Kikusha-Ni’s “the dusk in rain”

Carpe Diem haiku today is to write a haiku inspired by Kikusha-Ni:

my body all alone
in this autumn I feel –
the dusk in rain

I offer you two flavours, on the two values of the words loneliness and solitude. To me two different interpretations of the inspiration haiku


loneliness
sun obscured by clouds
fall depression

solitude
sun obscured by clouds
fall enlightenment

June 27 2013

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