Trifextra Challenge is to write 33 words on “third time’s the charm”
First letter explaining his sincerest love for her
– unanswered
Second letter explaining his intention for marriage
– still unanswered
Third letter explaining what he already knows about her
– finally answered
by the police
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June 21, 2013
What a twist! Loved it.
Thank you 🙂
Well done!
Charming.
That was a “gotcha”!
Like the ending
love is truly love only if it recognizes and forgives the faults of the other. Thanks for a great post.
Great ending!
Perhaps he sniffed too much of the perfume obsession as he wrote and pursued her.
There’s nothing like a good twist squeezed into 33 words. 🙂 Nice work!
I was going to say exactly what has already been said–hard to put a twist in 33 words. Great job!
Hey, that’s a short story in itself 🙂 Wonderful job!
ooooh, STALKER!!! good job, Bjorn!
Ooh, so much to this piece! Love the twist. Great job with the prompt!
She should have answered the first one! This was wonderful Bjorn! 😀
Very clever. So much in those 33-words.
Good job, I wasn’t expecting the third one to like that.
hahaha And stalker-man goes down ;D Very good.
Love the unexpected twist!
Chills up my spine, right about now! I agree-great twist!
Terrific! Never underestimate a stalker!
I can’t top the previous comments. Good one!
Haha! Wonderful!
Nice twist. Creepy. Every move you make….the Police.
Beautiful and then the twist…love it but no surprise.